Poetry Writing Experiment (04/2026)

The other day I attempted a poetry writing experiment where I wrote some verse based off ‘random’ phrases that I had found in various sources.  Initially, I compiled a list of 40 of them but then I whittled them down to 15, which you can see below.  The statements come from a broad cross-section of sources: one sentence is from the well-known poem The Rime of the Ancient Mariner by Samuel Coleridge; another is from the novel Robinson Crusoe.  Some are from an Australian lifestyle magazine, one is from a Christian devotional, another is from a recipe book for diabetics, and some are from the sports section of a newspaper.  The quotations that I selected are as follows:

  • Anise hyssop
  • Mistletoe bird
  • The Pyjama Federation
  • Navicular hotspot
  • Muscle twitching
  • Simmering casserole of commerce.
  • “The naked hulk alongside came”.
  • Peering into the collapsed crevasse.
  • “Today we love what tomorrow we’ll hate”.
  • “None of the bomb damage was wasted”.
  • A full account of our calamity was sent.
  • So, how are your roots doing?
  • Don’t go wasting snowstorms.
  • The perfect way to embellish corners.
  • Desert is the new black.

I molded and adapted the statements to suit the poem that I was writing and what follows is what I eventually came up with; it’s cryptic and ambiguous, but it was fun to write.  The first two stanzas sound more serious but the last was more playful, one where I was able to find a place for the words “Pyjama Federation”.  It’s 138 words in length and was written in rhyming couplets of (mostly) hendecasyllables, where each line has 11 syllables.  Enjoy.

Frozen Chosen (Poem)

This poem that I am publishing here, in the form of a rondeau redoublé, is a controversial one given its strident critique of the modern Christian church.  There are many things that I could say about this and I would never get to the end of it in my own lifetime if I were to attempt it; however, after being a Christian for the last 28 years and having been to many churches of various theological and ecclesiastical traditions, having been to Bible college, and having once worked as a pastor, I believe I can say something on the issue.  I know there are many Christians who are genuine, down-to-earth, loving and Spirit-filled but they are very much the exception and not the norm.  Many churches and many in them are worldly, compromised, and indoctrinated by the spirit of this age and so this poem reflects that.  If you enjoy it then you understand where I am coming from and we are kindred; if you are offended by it then take it to God, reflect on yourself, and see where the Holy Spirit is leading you to grow.  If you are not a Christian then you may sympathise and my heart goes out to you.

God bless, Nahum.